Comments for Kandy Fangs http://www.kandyfangs.com a Draco Torre story Tue, 30 Aug 2011 15:01:46 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.5.1 Comment on Final Dance – 2 by David G Shrock http://www.kandyfangs.com/?p=223#comment-746 David G Shrock Tue, 30 Aug 2011 15:01:46 +0000 http://www.kandyfangs.com/?p=223#comment-746 The sudden POV switch (with change from third to first person) is a risk, asking a great deal of the reader. I had debated, but the story demanded it. I’m not comfortable with first-person storytelling. As a reader I expect more from the author, and many appear more like third-person stories with the wrong person. Usually I avoid first-person storytelling as I don’t feel I have the skills. It’s nice to hear that the change in POV and style worked out.

Kandy Fangs is the kind of story I enjoy reading, but so few authors do weird. So, I did my best to fit this story into my life.

Thanks for following along on this ride.

]]> Comment on Final Dance – 2 by Jason Coggins http://www.kandyfangs.com/?p=223#comment-745 Jason Coggins Tue, 30 Aug 2011 09:48:37 +0000 http://www.kandyfangs.com/?p=223#comment-745 My only ever concern with this series was the POV switch a few episodes back but this finale put that bad-boy to bed. Seriously, what an inspired storytelling device, dude!

Kandy Fangs was a cunningly crafted and brightly written tale standing proud out here on the fiction saturated world wide web. I will miss her. Whatever you do next David I am your reader for life.

RIP,

Jason

]]> Comment on Final Dance – 2 by David G Shrock http://www.kandyfangs.com/?p=223#comment-742 David G Shrock Mon, 29 Aug 2011 17:20:33 +0000 http://www.kandyfangs.com/?p=223#comment-742 Glad you enjoyed it. Kandy is a bit weird putting her in a niche. I don’t have much time for promotion, so this isn’t the best time for mainstream. We’ll see where Kandy goes from here. I’m certain she has a few more surprises for me. Thanks for everything.

]]> Comment on Final Dance – 2 by Carrie Clevenger http://www.kandyfangs.com/?p=223#comment-740 Carrie Clevenger Mon, 29 Aug 2011 11:47:31 +0000 http://www.kandyfangs.com/?p=223#comment-740 Loved this ending. Superb, brilliant, and any other words I can think of to describe a great story. I will get your book. Better yet, submit it. Send it to publishers or agents. At any rate, I see good things in story for Kandy.

RIP.

Carrie

]]> Comment on My Ghost in a Party Dress by Jason Coggins http://www.kandyfangs.com/?p=217#comment-723 Jason Coggins Tue, 23 Aug 2011 09:19:16 +0000 http://www.kandyfangs.com/?p=217#comment-723 I loved the pace at the beginning there. Slow, sexy and steady, building for the end of level climax fighting the bad guy … then bang! In comes another one of your trade mark mind f**k twists. Geez, just when I thought I had a grip on what’s going on …

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